Jackson, I feel like my first comment may have disparead. But I love this charcater. His want is clear - please pitty me! He wants to evoke love form his mom but also wants to seem grown up and independant. Lovely.
I am looking forward to seeing some of the complexity of his situation start to creep in; does he believe in himself? Did he think he would be doing better? Does he have full faith in his music? (I hope your real life release went well btw)
Jackson, I feel like my first comment may have disparead. But I love this charcater. His want is clear - please pitty me! He wants to evoke love form his mom but also wants to seem grown up and independant. Lovely.
I am looking forward to seeing some of the complexity of his situation start to creep in; does he believe in himself? Did he think he would be doing better? Does he have full faith in his music? (I hope your real life release went well btw)
This looks like a great start. I love the grounded plot. Can't wait to see what you come up with this week.