1. What obstacle is your character facing? Again, keep it focused on the person you are speaking to.
a. the obstacle my character is facing is the feeling that his wife's parents won't accept him no matter what. Throughout the entire time, he thinks if he gets revenge he will be happy again and content. Now he is thinking that no matter what he won't since he feels like it's his fault in the first place.
2. What will be the consequence if your character does not get what they want? What is at stake?
a. My character won't get any bad consequences, it's mostly mental. If Rapp doesn't get the revenge he intends to get, he won't feel happy again. This is the final task he has to do and he feels like it's all or nothing for it so it can be over with, the only thing at stake is his happiness.
I am enjoying the way you deepened the connection to the parents. Excellent work in making the revenge story also have a personal and emotional stake for the character. I have been really enjoyed watching this character develop. Thank you for your work and your specificity.