My heart! I love how I can feel how much she misses her family in this. I also love the clear obstacle she has; the timezones keep her separated and also tried. Excellent work. The next step is going to be to give her some stakes; can we see the conflict between wanting to pursue her dreams and wanting to be with her family. Which one is stronger?
My heart! I love how I can feel how much she misses her family in this. I also love the clear obstacle she has; the timezones keep her separated and also tried. Excellent work. The next step is going to be to give her some stakes; can we see the conflict between wanting to pursue her dreams and wanting to be with her family. Which one is stronger?
I cant wait for the next video.